lol. Indeed, 'tis. I have been working on a short-story for past one month, and it's still only half finished. Would you like a look, though? I would like you to see it. Let me have an email id in case you would.
p.s. it's still rough and unedited (whatever there is of it.) I thought i should warn you. :)
A very charming and amusing start! I like it! And I like the narrative position you have taken in telling it... like a friend sitting next to you with an amusing yarn about the neighbors! :)
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lol. Indeed, 'tis. I have been working on a short-story for past one month, and it's still only half finished. Would you like a look, though? I would like you to see it. Let me have an email id in case you would.
p.s. it's still rough and unedited (whatever there is of it.) I thought i should warn you. :)
Sure, would love to! :
philosoph75@yahoo.com
Done. :)
Got it!
A very charming and amusing start! I like it! And I like the narrative position you have taken in telling it... like a friend sitting next to you with an amusing yarn about the neighbors! :)
You've "sign-posted" soem future events. I hope that the real-estate guy "get's his" for trying to cheat the caretaker woman! ;)
...maybe the snake finds it's way into his car's trunk/boot! ;)
...or it chases after it at 40 mph and jumps in... answering the "title dilemna"...
I'm now ruining this for you, aren't I? Sorry. I'll be quiet.
Lol. Nothing of the sort. Just a very "banal" tale, really. :)
Thanks for the kind words. :)
Hehe. No problem. :)
I would show it to you once it's finished...if ever. Thanks for taking out the time.
My pleasure. :)
Thanks for sharing!
My pleasure! :)
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